I was counting the twenties when the door chimed.
The man who stumbled in was covered in dirt. Leaves stuck to his jacket. His eyes were wide and wet. He looked back at the parking lot like something was about to come through the glass.
He hit the counter with both palms. “Lock the doors. Lock them NOW.”
My hand went to the panic button under the register. “Sir, step back.”
“I am NOT here to rob you.” His voice cracked on the last word. “There is someone in the field behind your station. They have been following me for six miles.”
I looked past him. Through the glass doors. Across the empty lot.
A figure stood at the tree line.
Just standing. Arms at its sides. Not moving.
The man turned and pressed his forehead against the glass. “Please. I ran. I ran as fast as I could. It didn’t run. It just walked. Kept the same pace the whole time.”
I kept my hand on the button. “How do I know you didn’t bring someone?”
“Because I don’t know who that is.” He was breathing so hard the words came out in chunks. “I was driving. My truck died three miles back. I started walking. I saw it standing in the middle of the road. When I turned, it turned.”
The figure hadn’t moved.
“Please,” he said again. “Just lock the doors.”
I looked at his hands. They were shaking. No weapon. No bag. He looked like he’d been running through brush.
I hit the lock button. The deadbolt clicked.
The man slid down the wall and sat on the floor. “Thank you.”
I looked back at the tree line.
The figure was gone.
“Where did it go?” I said.
The man looked up. His face went gray. “What?”
“It was there. Now it’s not.”
He scrambled to his feet. Pressed himself against the glass. Stared out.
I scanned the lot. The pumps. The trash can. The edge of the road.
Nothing.
Then my phone buzzed on the counter.
I didn’t recognize the number. I picked it up.
A voice said, “He’s lying to you.”
I looked at the man on the floor.
He was staring at me.
What Happens When You Don’t Hang Up
I should have hung up. I know that now.
But the voice was calm. Not threatening. Not whispering. Just calm, the way a person sounds when they’re telling you something they’ve already decided you need to know.
“Who is this?” I said.
Silence. Then: “Ask him where his truck is.”
I looked at the man. He was still watching me. He’d stopped pressing against the glass. Something had changed in his face. The panic was still there but something else had slid in under it.
“Sir,” I said. “Where exactly did your truck break down?”
He blinked. “On Route 9. Three miles back, I said that.”
I said it again into the phone. “He says Route 9.”
The voice said, “There’s no truck on Route 9.”
I didn’t say anything.
“I drove it,” the voice said. “Twenty minutes ago. Both directions. No truck.”
I put the phone against my chest. The man was looking at me like he knew exactly what was being said on the other end. His jaw was tight. His hands had stopped shaking.
“Who’s on the phone?” he said.
“A concerned citizen.”
“What are they telling you?”
“That there’s no truck on Route 9.”
Something moved behind his eyes. Fast. Gone before I could read it. “It’s in a ditch,” he said. “Off the shoulder. You wouldn’t see it from the road.”
I lifted the phone back up. “He says it’s in a ditch.”
“I checked the ditches,” the voice said.
The store felt very small. It’s a tiny station – two aisles, a cooler in the back, a bathroom I don’t let anyone use after 10 PM. I’ve worked this shift alone for four years. My coworker Pam does days. My manager Dale does nothing. It’s just me, the register, and the button.
I had my hand back on the button.
The Shift
“I need you to look at the camera feed,” the voice said. “The one on the south side of your building.”
I frowned. “How do you know I have a camera on the south side?”
“Because I’m the one who installed them.”
That stopped me cold.
We’d had a security upgrade eighteen months back. I wasn’t there for the install. Dale handled it. I’d just come in one morning and there were four new cameras and a little monitor under the counter I mostly used to watch the pump area.
I crouched down. Pulled up the south camera.
The view was the field. The tree line. The dirt access road that runs behind the station to nowhere in particular.
The figure was back.
But it wasn’t at the tree line anymore.
It was at the edge of the lot. Maybe forty feet from the building.
I stood up slowly. “It’s closer.”
“I know,” the voice said. “It’s been moving every time your camera cycles. Every forty-five seconds.”
“Why are you watching my cameras?”
“Because I’ve been following it since Millhaven.”
Millhaven is twenty-two miles north. It’s mostly farmland and a grain elevator and a bar called Doyle’s that burned down two summers ago.
“Following it how?” I said.
“At a distance.” A pause. “You don’t want to get close.”
I looked at the man. He was watching the monitor now. Looking at the figure on the screen. His face had gone through something I couldn’t name. He sat down again. Slowly. Like his legs had given a decision without him.
“Okay,” I said into the phone. “So who’s the man in my store?”
The voice said, “That’s what I’m trying to figure out.”
The Part He Didn’t Argue With
I asked the man directly. I said, “The person on this phone has been tracking that thing since Millhaven. They say there’s no truck on Route 9. I need you to tell me something true.”
He rubbed his face with both hands. Long pause.
“My name is Dennis Pruitt,” he said. “I live outside Millhaven. I work grain storage.”
“Okay.”
“I was driving home from my brother’s. My truck did die. But it wasn’t on Route 9.” He looked at the floor. “It was on County 14. I panicked and I ran toward the lights and I don’t know why I said Route 9.”
“Why’d you lie?”
“I didn’t think I was lying. I just said the first road name I could think of.” He looked up. “I’m not good under pressure. My wife will tell you that.”
I relayed it to the phone. Dennis Pruitt. County 14. Millhaven.
A long silence on the other end.
Then: “His name checks out. There’s a Pruitt family out there. Dennis would be the second son. Forty-three, forty-four.”
“How do you know that?”
“Small county.” Another pause. “Okay. He’s probably who he says he is.”
“Probably.”
“Probably.”
Dennis was watching me. “Who is that?” he said again.
I said, “Someone who knows your family.”
He opened his mouth. Closed it. “My brother?”
I asked.
The voice said nothing for a moment. Then: “No.”
What It Does When It Gets Close
The camera cycled.
The figure was at the edge of the concrete apron. Ten feet from the building. I could see it clearly now on the monitor. Average height. Dark clothing. The kind of nondescript that makes your brain slide off it. Like trying to remember a face in a dream.
“It’s at the building,” I said.
“Don’t let anyone in,” the voice said.
“The doors are locked.”
“Keep them locked. Don’t turn off the lights.”
“What does it do when it gets close?”
Silence.
“Hey. What does it do when it gets close?”
“I don’t know,” the voice said. “Every time it gets this close, someone opens the door.”
Dennis had his face in his hands.
I was watching the monitor. The figure stood there. Not looking at the door. Not looking at the cameras. Just standing, the way a coat rack stands, except coat racks don’t make you feel like something is wrong with the air.
“Has anyone ever not opened the door?” I asked.
“Once,” the voice said.
“What happened?”
“It stood there for six hours. Then it walked back into the field.”
“Six hours.”
“Six hours.”
I looked at Dennis. “We’re going to be here a while.”
He nodded like he’d already figured that out.
2:17 AM
The voice stayed on the line. Didn’t talk much. Checked in every few minutes. Told me what the figure was doing on the camera when I couldn’t see the monitor from where I was standing.
At 1:40, it moved to the north side of the building.
At 1:55, it came back to the south.
At 2:09, it sat down. Just sat. Cross-legged on the concrete like it was waiting for a bus.
Dennis and I ate gas station sandwiches. I charged him for his. It felt important to be normal about something.
He told me about his brother. Some argument about their mother’s property that had been going on for two years. That’s where he’d been tonight. Trying to settle it. It hadn’t gone well. He’d been driving home in a bad mood when the truck died.
“Did you see it before the truck died?” I asked.
He thought about it. “The engine light had been on for a week. So the truck dying wasn’t – I don’t think that was it.”
“But did you see it before?”
He was quiet. “I think it was in my headlights. On the road. I thought it was a deer.”
I told the voice.
The voice said, “That’s how it starts.”
I didn’t ask what that meant.
At 2:17, the figure stood up.
Turned.
Walked back to the tree line.
Stopped at the edge.
Stood there for eleven more minutes.
Then it was gone.
I watched the monitor for twenty minutes after. Nothing moved.
The voice said, “I think that’s it for tonight.”
“For tonight.”
“It doesn’t usually come back the same night.”
“Usually.”
“Usually.”
I let out a breath. “Who are you?”
A pause. Long enough that I thought they’d hung up.
“Someone who made the mistake of getting close,” the voice said. “A long time ago.”
Then the line went dead.
What I Wrote in the Incident Log
I’m required to fill out an incident log for anything that happens on shift. Break-ins, drive-offs, medical emergencies. I’ve written up a drunk guy who tried to fight the chip display. I’ve written up a woman who passed out in the bathroom and turned out to be diabetic and I stayed with her until the ambulance came.
I stared at the log for a long time.
I wrote: Man sought shelter from possible threat at tree line. Threat not confirmed. Doors locked as precaution. No property damage. No injuries. Subject (Dennis Pruitt, Millhaven) left at 2:51 AM after situation resolved. Did not require police.
Dennis had called his wife from the store phone. She’d driven out and picked him up. She was a small woman with tired eyes and she looked at me like she wanted to say something but didn’t know what. She put her hand on my arm for a second. Then she steered Dennis to the car.
I watched their taillights disappear.
The lot was empty. The field was dark. The tree line was just trees.
I went back behind the counter and picked up my phone.
The number that had called me was gone. Not just unanswered. Gone. Not in my recent calls at all.
I checked twice.
I pulled up the camera logs.
The south camera had a gap. 1:02 AM to 2:28 AM. Eighty-six minutes of nothing. Not black screen. Not static.
Just nothing. Like the file had never existed.
I finished counting the twenties.
I got the number wrong twice.
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For more chilling encounters and unsettling revelations, read about the time my partner killed Danny Martinez or when my babysitter said “He promised no one would trace it to him”.
