The man in the back of the bus is laughing. He’s pointing at my husband’s leg – the prosthetic one – and doing an impression. A LIMPING, exaggerated impression. Marcus just stares out the window like he can’t hear it.
Our daughter is sitting between us. She’s four. She’s watching everything.
But twelve days ago, I didn’t know what that man’s laugh would cost him.
Marcus lost his leg outside Kandahar in 2013. He doesn’t talk about it. He takes the 41 bus to physical therapy three times a week because parking downtown costs twenty dollars and we can’t afford that on top of everything else.
I started riding with him after Bria was born, just to help with the stroller, the bags. “Denise, I can handle a bus,” he’d say. But I liked going. It was our time.
The first Tuesday, the guy got on at Vine Street. Mid-thirties, polo shirt, wireless earbuds around his neck. He sat in the back and made a comment when Marcus stood to let an older woman sit.
“Damn, Robocop.”
Marcus didn’t react.
I did. My face went hot. But Marcus put his hand on my knee and shook his head.
The next Thursday, the guy was there again. Same seat. This time he nudged his friend and whispered something when Marcus got on. They both laughed.
Bria looked up at me. “Mama, why are they laughing at Daddy?”
I told her some people are just rude.
The third time, he was louder. He called Marcus “the Tin Man” to the whole back section. A couple people looked uncomfortable but nobody said anything.
That night I couldn’t sleep. I lay in bed staring at the ceiling while Marcus snored, and I opened the city transit authority website on my phone.
Every bus in the fleet has cameras. Every single one.
I filed a formal harassment report. I included dates, times, the route number, and the seat location. I requested the footage.
Then I called Marcus’s VA caseworker. Then I called a disability rights attorney my sister knew from church.
I waited.
Now it’s Tuesday again. The guy is doing his impression and the whole back row is quiet. Bria is pressing her face into my arm.
The bus stops at Elm. The doors open.
A woman in a gray suit steps on. She walks straight to the back, holds up a county badge, and says the man’s full name.
“DEREK ALLEN PRUITT. I need you to come with me.”
His face goes white. His friend slides away from him.
The woman turns to me. Then she says something I don’t expect.
“Mrs. Jeffries, there are three other complaints. Going back EIGHT MONTHS. We’re going to need your husband to testify.”
Marcus finally looks away from the window. Bria tugs his sleeve.
“Daddy,” she says, “that lady knows your name too.”
What Marcus Never Said Out Loud
He’d known about the complaints. Not all of them, not the specifics. But two weeks before that Tuesday, I’d sat him down at the kitchen table after Bria was in bed and told him what I’d done.
He was quiet for a long time.
Not angry-quiet. Just the other kind. The kind he gets when something is hitting somewhere he doesn’t let people see.
“Denise.” That’s all he said. My name, flat.
“I know you didn’t ask me to.”
“No.”
“But she’s four, Marcus. She’s four and she’s watching a man make fun of her father and she doesn’t understand why you’re not doing anything about it.”
He looked at the table. There’s a scratch on it from when we moved in, a long diagonal one near the corner, and he traced it with his thumb.
“I do something about it and it escalates,” he said. “I know how that goes. I’m a Black man with a prosthetic leg on a city bus. I know exactly how that goes.”
I knew he was right. I’d thought about that too. Every version of Marcus standing up and saying something ended the same way, and none of them ended with Derek Pruitt looking like the problem.
So I’d done it differently.
“The attorney says the footage is clear,” I told him. “Three incidents. Your face, his face, the whole thing.”
Marcus didn’t say anything for another minute. Then he got up, filled a glass of water, drank half of it standing at the sink.
“Three other complaints,” he said, more to himself than to me.
“That’s what she told me today. Eight months.”
He set the glass down.
“Eight months,” he said again.
The 41 Bus, and What It Costs
People don’t think about what it takes to get somewhere when you’ve got a prosthetic limb and a four-year-old and a parking situation that costs more than an hour of your wife’s work.
Marcus’s PT appointments are at a clinic on Crestwood. Forty-minute bus ride on the 41, transfer at Harmon if the timing’s bad. He goes Monday, Wednesday, Friday. I go with him Tuesday and Thursday when I’m not on shift, because those are the days he runs errands after, and Bria’s with us, and the stroller is a whole project getting on and off.
He qualified for a parking subsidy through the VA but the paperwork got lost twice and the third time they said he’d have to reapply and he looked at me with this expression and I just said, we’ll figure it out, and we did.
The 41 is fine. Mostly. It’s a city bus. There’s a guy who always has a speaker going too loud, a woman who takes up two seats with her bags and apologizes every time like it’s the first time she’s ever done it. Normal stuff. The kind of thing you stop noticing after a while.
Derek Pruitt started riding it in February. We didn’t know his name then. He was just the guy in the back.
The first comment, the Robocop thing, I almost convinced myself it was under his breath. That maybe I’d misheard. Marcus’s face didn’t change so I told myself it was fine.
The second time I knew I hadn’t misheard anything.
What I Found on the Transit Authority Website at 11:47 PM
The harassment reporting form is not easy to find. I want to say that. It took me twenty-three minutes and three different navigation paths to get to it, and when I got there it had a character limit that cut off my description mid-sentence, so I had to summarize and then attach a separate document.
I submitted the form. I got an automated confirmation email that said my report would be reviewed within ten to fifteen business days.
I did not wait ten to fifteen business days.
I called the main transit authority number the next morning and asked to speak to someone in passenger services. Got transferred twice, left on hold, called back. Third call I got a woman named Patrice who actually listened, took down my information by hand, and said she’d flag it internally.
“The cameras,” I said. “Do they actually work?”
“On the 41? Yes ma’am. That line was updated in 2021.”
Then I called my sister Rochelle, who goes to a big church on the east side, the kind with a whole directory of congregants who work in various useful fields. She gave me the name of a man named Gerald Osei who’d done disability rights work for a family in her congregation two years ago. I called him that afternoon.
Gerald was not cheap. He also said he’d do an initial consultation for free and that if what I was describing was accurate, we might not need to go far.
“Transit authorities are sensitive about ADA harassment cases right now,” he said. “Especially with footage.”
“There’s footage.”
“Then let’s see what we’re working with.”
Twelve Days
I didn’t tell Marcus about Gerald right away. I told him about the transit report, and he did the quiet thing, and I let it sit.
What I didn’t say was that Gerald had already been in contact with the transit authority’s legal department by day four. That by day seven, they’d confirmed the footage covered all three incidents and that they’d already identified Derek Allen Pruitt by his transit card, because he used a registered card, not cash.
Registered card.
His name, his address, his employment information, all attached to a little tap-and-go card he’d been using to ride the same bus and harass the same man for eight months.
Gerald called me on day nine.
“There are three other complaints,” he said. “Two women and one other man. The man uses a wheelchair. The complaints go back to February.”
I sat down on the floor of my kitchen. Bria was watching something in the other room. I could hear it through the wall.
“Nobody did anything with the complaints?”
“They were filed. They were logged. Nobody connected them because they were filed through different channels. Yours is the one that got the footage request moving.”
I thought about the other people. The women. The man in the wheelchair. Eight months of Derek Pruitt on the 41, doing whatever he did, and everyone filing something somewhere and nothing connecting.
“What happens now?” I asked.
Gerald told me.
The Gray Suit
Her name was Vivian Marsh. She was not a police officer. She worked for the county’s transit authority compliance office, which I had not known existed before Gerald mentioned it, and she had been building the consolidated case for five days before she stepped onto that bus.
The plan was not my idea. Gerald suggested it. Vivian agreed to it. The timing worked because Marcus’s PT appointment was on Tuesday and the 41 ran the same route at the same time and Derek Pruitt, with his registered card and his predictable habits, had tapped on at Vine Street every Tuesday for the last six weeks without fail.
I knew she was coming. Marcus didn’t.
I almost told him that morning. We were in the kitchen, he was pouring coffee, Bria was eating half a waffle and wearing the other half somehow, and I opened my mouth and then I didn’t say anything.
I wanted him to see it. Not be briefed on it. See it.
So I sat on the bus with Bria pressed into my arm and the back of my neck going cold while Derek did his thing, his stupid, stupid thing, and I watched Marcus stare out the window at the buildings going by.
He does that on the bus. He watches the city. I’ve never asked him what he’s thinking about.
The bus stopped at Elm.
Vivian stepped on.
“Daddy, That Lady Knows Your Name Too”
Derek Pruitt went white in a specific way. Not gradually. One second he was mid-laugh and the next second his face was a different color and his hands were flat on his thighs.
His friend, some guy in a red jacket whose name I still don’t know, just stood up and moved to a different seat like that was going to do something.
Vivian didn’t raise her voice. She didn’t have to. The bus had gone completely still.
She walked Derek off at Elm Street. Through the window I watched him standing on the sidewalk with his shoulders caved in, and Vivian talking, and another man I didn’t recognize who’d been waiting there.
Gerald had told me what the consequences could look like. Civil penalties. A transit ban. The other complainants’ cases folding into a formal ADA harassment filing. Whether anything criminal attached to it depended on a few things still being sorted.
Marcus was looking at me.
Not at the window. At me.
“How long?” he said.
“Twelve days.”
He looked at Bria, who was looking at the window where Derek used to be.
“Gerald Osei,” I said. “Rochelle’s church. And Patrice at the transit authority, she was the one who actually got the footage moving.”
Marcus didn’t say anything. He reached over Bria and took my hand.
His hand is big. Always warm, even in winter. I don’t know why I always notice that.
Bria was still watching the sidewalk.
“Daddy,” she said, “that lady knows your name too.”
Marcus laughed. A short one, surprised out of him.
“Yeah, baby,” he said. “She does.”
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For more stories about standing up for your family, you might find solace in reading about My Video Got 400K Views. Then the Woman’s Mother Called Me., or perhaps see how another parent handled a tough situation in I Didn’t Say a Word When They Benched My Son. I Waited Until Saturday Morning.. You could also see a different perspective on family in My Daughter Drew Our Family. There Are Five of Us in the Picture..
